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Seduced by the Night by =AeWolf:iconAeWolf:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Promising are the whispers
of the night wind

Enchanting are the melodies
of the dark waters

The soft breath of the wind
encircling the body

The earth has grown silent
No sound from the stone

Beneath the feet only steady vibrations
reflecting the rhythm of darkness

Longing for something intangible
Yet there are forms in the dark

-shadows without light
blackness flowing near

A kiss of black fire
embraced in the arms of death

Held aloft by the thousand arms
of the night
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2007, belongs to Seduced by the Night Script [link]

For me, this poems kinda describes a Lasombra embrace.
*Lasombra is a vampire clan in the dark fantasy rpg setting World of Darkness by White Wolf.

I'm participating in :iconartheeria:'s Undead, Darkness & Desire Contest [link] with with this work.

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Mood: Love ~Kurokage-sama Oct 19, 2007, 12:26:58 PM
This is a beautifully written poem.

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=WinterDruidess Oct 22, 2007, 1:28:17 AM
beautiful poem sis! u are getting better by the hour... trying to be more famous than I am? looooooooooooooooooool kidding:P

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=AeWolf Oct 23, 2007, 4:57:46 AM
lol thanks for the kudos :D

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=WinterDruidess Oct 23, 2007, 8:09:05 AM
welcome*

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We are Spiritual beings living a Human experience

Mi Portfolio: [link]

My man's: [link]
My soulsis's: [link]
My elf: [link]
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~RenMason Oct 26, 2007, 3:32:38 PM
Nicely written. <3

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